Describe a plan you had to change

Band 6

I would like to talk about a plan I have to change時制の誤り：正しくは「had to change」 last April, a picnic by the Charvak reservoir on Saturday with six classmates from my course. We organise時制の誤り：正しくは「had been organising」 it for two weeks and everybody had a job, and I was in charge of the way不正確な語：「route」のほうが的確 and the transport. We agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast say時制の誤り：正しくは「forecast said」 heavy rain for all weekend, and the road to the lake is very muddy, so we knew the plan was not good基本的な言い回しで、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない. We wrote many messages, and then we decide時制の誤り：正しくは「decided」 not to cancel and to go to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room. We took the food that we prepared, and Timur’s mother gave us two board games. Honestly個人的なコメントを導く自然なつなぎの表現, I was disappointed first, because I worked hard for this plan and I wanted the lake, but at the end I enjoyed it more, because we played to late evening and nobody was afraid about the road. I learned that a good day is about people and not about the place.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a plan I had to change last April: a Saturday picnic by the Charvak reservoir with six classmates from my course. We’d been organising it for a fortnight, everyone had a job, I was in charge of the route and transport, and we’d agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast changed to heavy rain for the whole weekend, and the road to the lake can gets動詞の形の誤り：正しくは「can get」 very muddy, so it quickly became clear that the original plan had fallen through計画がうまくいかなかったことを表す、自然な句動詞. After a lot of messages, we decided to move everything to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room, instead of calling the whole day off動名詞を伴う「instead of」を正確に使っている. We brought the food we’d already prepared, and Timur’s mother lent us two board games. In the end, I enjoyed it more than I’d expected「explain」の行に答える、振り返りのつなぎの表現: we played until late and nobody had to worry about getting home in the dark. I was disappointed at first, but it taught me that a good day depends on the people more than the place.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a plan I had to change last April: a Saturday picnic by the Charvak reservoir with six classmates from my course. We’d been organising it for a fortnight, everyone had a job, I was in charge of the route and transport, and we’d agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast changed to heavy rain for the whole weekend, and the road to the lake can get very muddy, so it quickly became clear that the original plan wasn’t sensible. After a lot of messages, we decided that, instead of calling it off, we’d move everything to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room. We brought the food we’d already prepared, and Timur’s mother lent us two board games. In the end, I enjoyed it more than I’d expected「explain」の行に答える、振り返りのつなぎの表現: we played until late, nobody had to worry about getting home before dark, and we talked more than we would have outdoors条件文の省略を自然に使っている. I was disappointed at first, but it taught me that a good day depends on the people far more than on the place.