Describe a plan you had to change

Band 6

I would like to talk about a plan I have to change時態錯誤：應為「had to change」 last April, a picnic by the Charvak reservoir on Saturday with six classmates from my course. We organise時態錯誤：應為「had been organising」 it for two weeks and everybody had a job, and I was in charge of the way用詞不精確：「route」更精準 and the transport. We agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast say時態錯誤：應為「forecast said」 heavy rain for all weekend, and the road to the lake is very muddy, so we knew the plan was not good基本說法，限制了Lexical Resource的分數. We wrote many messages, and then we decide時態錯誤：應為「decided」 not to cancel and to go to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room. We took the food that we prepared, and Timur’s mother gave us two board games. Honestly引出個人意見的自然連接用語, I was disappointed first, because I worked hard for this plan and I wanted the lake, but at the end I enjoyed it more, because we played to late evening and nobody was afraid about the road. I learned that a good day is about people and not about the place.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a plan I had to change last April: a Saturday picnic by the Charvak reservoir with six classmates from my course. We’d been organising it for a fortnight, everyone had a job, I was in charge of the route and transport, and we’d agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast changed to heavy rain for the whole weekend, and the road to the lake can gets動詞形式錯誤：應為「can get」 very muddy, so it quickly became clear that the original plan had fallen through描述計畫落空的自然片語動詞. After a lot of messages, we decided to move everything to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room, instead of calling the whole day off正確使用「instead of」搭配動名詞. We brought the food we’d already prepared, and Timur’s mother lent us two board games. In the end, I enjoyed it more than I’d expected帶有反思的連接用語，回答了「explain」那一行: we played until late and nobody had to worry about getting home in the dark. I was disappointed at first, but it taught me that a good day depends on the people more than the place.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a plan I had to change last April: a Saturday picnic by the Charvak reservoir with six classmates from my course. We’d been organising it for a fortnight, everyone had a job, I was in charge of the route and transport, and we’d agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast changed to heavy rain for the whole weekend, and the road to the lake can get very muddy, so it quickly became clear that the original plan wasn’t sensible. After a lot of messages, we decided that, instead of calling it off, we’d move everything to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room. We brought the food we’d already prepared, and Timur’s mother lent us two board games. In the end, I enjoyed it more than I’d expected帶有反思的連接用語，回答了「explain」那一行: we played until late, nobody had to worry about getting home before dark, and we talked more than we would have outdoors自然使用的條件句省略. I was disappointed at first, but it taught me that a good day depends on the people far more than on the place.