Band 6
I want to talk about my elderly neighbour, Mrs. Aliyeva, who live主語と動詞の不一致:正しくは「lives」 alone a few doors from my family. About two years ago, she break時制の誤り:正しくは「broke」 her wrist after a fall and suddenly she cannot do basic things like carrying shopping bags or even opening jars, which was obviously a tough spot for someone who lives alone. My mother notice時制の誤り:正しくは「noticed」 she was struggling one afternoon and asked me if I could step in and help until her wrist got better.
Band 7
I’d like to talk about an elderly neighbour of mine, Mrs. Aliyeva, who lives alone a few doors down自然で的確な表現 from my family. About two years ago, she broke her wrist after a fall and suddenly couldn’t manage basic things like carrying shopping bags or even opening jars, which was obviously a tough spot for someone living by herself非制限用法の関係詞節の自然な使い方. My mother noticed she was struggling one afternoon and asked if I could step in and help out until her wrist healed properly.
Band 8
I’d like to talk about an elderly neighbour of mine, Mrs. Aliyeva, who lives alone just a few doors down from my family. About two years ago, she broke her wrist in a fall and suddenly found herself unable to manage basic things自然で複雑な動詞の構造 like carrying shopping bags or even opening jars — a genuinely tough spot for someone living on her own的確でイディオム的な表現. My mother noticed she was struggling one afternoon and asked whether I could step in until her wrist healed properly.