Describe a person who loves to grow plants

Band 6

I want to talk about my neighbour Mr. Rustam, a teacher who is now retired and live主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「lives」 in the flat under ours in Namangan. He is in his late sixties and he loves plantsあいまい：「growing plants」または「gardening」のほうが明確 very much. He has a sunny balcony and he make時制の誤り：正しくは「has made」または「made」 it a small garden, with tomatoes, peppers, some basil in old tin cans, a lemon tree in a big pot, and red flowers in spring. Every morning at seven he are動詞の形の誤り：正しくは「is」 there with a small can and he talks to the plants, and my sister thinks it is very funny基本的な言い回しで、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない. I know him from I was a child前置詞と時制の誤り：正しくは「have known him since I was a child」, because he taught me maths for one year, and now I sometimes drink tea with him and he gives me small plants for my home. I think he started when he stopped work, because the days were empty. His wife sometimes says that there is no place to sit, but she takes the basil for dinner. He says plants teach patience, and I think this is the reason he loves them, er自然な間、気にならないつなぎ言葉 you cannot hurry them.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my neighbour, Mr. Rustam, a retired schoolteacher in his late sixties who lives in the flat below ours in Namangan and who loves growing plants more than anyone I know. He has a long, sunny balcony that he’s turned into a small garden, with tomatoes, peppers, basil in old tin cans, a lemon tree in a big pot情景を思い浮かべやすい具体的な細部 and, in spring, a row of red geraniums. Every morning around seven he’s out there with a small watering can, talking quietly to the plants, which my sister finds hilarious. I’ve known him since I was a child「since」を伴う現在完了を正確に使っている, because he taught me maths for a year, and these days I often stop for tea and he give主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「he gives」 me cuttings to take home. As far as I can tell, he took up gardening after he retired, when the days suddenly felt empty. His wife sometimes complains that there is no space left to sit down, but she still picks the basil for dinner. He says plants teach you patienceその人自身の理由を伝える話法の使用, and I think that’s what he loves most about them.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my neighbour, Mr. Rustam, a retired schoolteacher in his late sixties who lives in the flat below ours in Namangan and who loves growing plants more than anyone I know. He has a long, sunny balcony that he’s turned into a small garden, with tomatoes, peppers, basil in old tin cans, a lemon tree in a big pot and, in spring, a row of red geraniums. Every morning around seven he’s out there with a small watering can, talking quietly to the plants, which my sister finds hilarious. I’ve known him since I was a child, because he taught me maths for a year, and these days I often stop for tea and he gives me cuttings to take home. As far as I can tell, he took up gardening after he retired, when the days suddenly felt empty. His wife sometimes complains that there is no space left to sit down, but she still picks the basil for dinner. He says plants teach you patience, and I think that’s what he loves most about them: you can’t hurry them, but you can see the effort bear fruit慣用句で締めくくる、バランスの取れた対比の構造, week by week.