Describe a person who loves to grow plants

Band 6

I want to talk about my neighbour Mr. Rustam, a teacher who is now retired and live主詞動詞不一致：應為「lives」 in the flat under ours in Namangan. He is in his late sixties and he loves plants不夠精確：「growing plants」或「gardening」更清楚 very much. He has a sunny balcony and he make時態錯誤：應為「has made」或「made」 it a small garden, with tomatoes, peppers, some basil in old tin cans, a lemon tree in a big pot, and red flowers in spring. Every morning at seven he are動詞形式錯誤：應為「is」 there with a small can and he talks to the plants, and my sister thinks it is very funny基本說法，限制了Lexical Resource的分數. I know him from I was a child介系詞與時態錯誤：應為「have known him since I was a child」, because he taught me maths for one year, and now I sometimes drink tea with him and he gives me small plants for my home. I think he started when he stopped work, because the days were empty. His wife sometimes says that there is no place to sit, but she takes the basil for dinner. He says plants teach patience, and I think this is the reason he loves them, er自然的停頓，填充詞不顯眼 you cannot hurry them.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my neighbour, Mr. Rustam, a retired schoolteacher in his late sixties who lives in the flat below ours in Namangan and who loves growing plants more than anyone I know. He has a long, sunny balcony that he’s turned into a small garden, with tomatoes, peppers, basil in old tin cans, a lemon tree in a big pot具體、容易想像的細節 and, in spring, a row of red geraniums. Every morning around seven he’s out there with a small watering can, talking quietly to the plants, which my sister finds hilarious. I’ve known him since I was a child正確使用現在完成式搭配「since」, because he taught me maths for a year, and these days I often stop for tea and he give主詞動詞不一致：應為「he gives」 me cuttings to take home. As far as I can tell, he took up gardening after he retired, when the days suddenly felt empty. His wife sometimes complains that there is no space left to sit down, but she still picks the basil for dinner. He says plants teach you patience用轉述帶出這個人自己的理由, and I think that’s what he loves most about them.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my neighbour, Mr. Rustam, a retired schoolteacher in his late sixties who lives in the flat below ours in Namangan and who loves growing plants more than anyone I know. He has a long, sunny balcony that he’s turned into a small garden, with tomatoes, peppers, basil in old tin cans, a lemon tree in a big pot and, in spring, a row of red geraniums. Every morning around seven he’s out there with a small watering can, talking quietly to the plants, which my sister finds hilarious. I’ve known him since I was a child, because he taught me maths for a year, and these days I often stop for tea and he gives me cuttings to take home. As far as I can tell, he took up gardening after he retired, when the days suddenly felt empty. His wife sometimes complains that there is no space left to sit down, but she still picks the basil for dinner. He says plants teach you patience, and I think that’s what he loves most about them: you can’t hurry them, but you can see the effort bear fruit平衡的對比結構，以慣用語收尾, week by week.