Describe a special day out that did not cost much

Band 6

I want to talk about a day out I haveKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “had” last June with my two friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams, and we wasSubjek dan kata kerja tidak sepadan: sepatutnya “were” very tired, so we decided to go to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We did not plan much. In the morning we packed our own lunch, bread and fruit and some boiled eggs, and we took the local bus. When we arrived, we walked around the lake, which took about one hour, and the view was really niceKosa kata asas; menghadkan Lexical Resource. The place was not famous, so there were not many people there. After that we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for a long time. The water was cold but Timur jumpKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “jumped” in anyway, and we laughKesilapan tense: sepatutnya “laughed” so much. I think this day was special because it was very simple and calm. We did not look at our phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I felt that the time was stoppedKesilapan bentuk pasif: sepatutnya “time had stopped”. After a hard month it was exactly what I needed, and now I try to do something like this every summer.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggsFrasa kata kerja dengan senarai tiga perkara yang jelas and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtakingKata adjektif yang kuat dan tepat. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so it was almost empty. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway, and we all laughingKesilapan bentuk kata kerja: sepatutnya “laughed” atau “were laughing” so much. What made the day special was how unhurried it feltCleft sentence memberi fokus yang jelas kepada jawapan: nobody looked at their phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I lost track of timeFrasa idiomatik yang semula jadi. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggs and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtaking. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so we almost had it to ourselves. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway and we all laughed until our sides hurt. What made the day special was how unhurried it feltCleft sentence memberi fokus yang jelas kepada jawapan: nobody looked at their phones, we simply talked about our plans, and I lost track of time completely. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, a genuine breath of fresh airFrasa idiomatik yang digunakan dengan tepat, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.