Describe a special day out that did not cost much

Band 6

I want to talk about a day out I haveใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “had” last June with my two friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams, and we wasประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “were” very tired, so we decided to go to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We did not plan much. In the morning we packed our own lunch, bread and fruit and some boiled eggs, and we took the local bus. When we arrived, we walked around the lake, which took about one hour, and the view was really niceคำศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource. The place was not famous, so there were not many people there. After that we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for a long time. The water was cold but Timur jumpใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “jumped” in anyway, and we laughใช้ tense ผิด ต้องเป็น “laughed” so much. I think this day was special because it was very simple and calm. We did not look at our phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I felt that the time was stoppedใช้รูป passive ผิด ต้องเป็น “time had stopped”. After a hard month it was exactly what I needed, and now I try to do something like this every summer.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggsวลีกริยาที่ระบุรายการ 3 อย่างชัดเจน and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtakingคำคุณศัพท์ที่หนักแน่นและแม่นยำ. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so it was almost empty. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway, and we all laughingรูปกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “laughed” หรือ “were laughing” so much. What made the day special was how unhurried it feltcleft sentence ทำให้คำตอบมีจุดเน้นชัดเจน: nobody looked at their phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I lost track of timeสำนวนที่เป็นธรรมชาติ. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggs and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtaking. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so we almost had it to ourselves. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway and we all laughed until our sides hurt. What made the day special was how unhurried it feltcleft sentence ทำให้คำตอบมีจุดเน้นชัดเจน: nobody looked at their phones, we simply talked about our plans, and I lost track of time completely. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, a genuine breath of fresh airใช้สำนวนได้แม่นยำ, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.