Describe a special day out that did not cost much

Band 6

I want to talk about a day out I haveLỗi thì: phải là “had” last June with my two friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams, and we wasLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “were” very tired, so we decided to go to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We did not plan much. In the morning we packed our own lunch, bread and fruit and some boiled eggs, and we took the local bus. When we arrived, we walked around the lake, which took about one hour, and the view was really niceTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource. The place was not famous, so there were not many people there. After that we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for a long time. The water was cold but Timur jumpLỗi thì: phải là “jumped” in anyway, and we laughLỗi thì: phải là “laughed” so much. I think this day was special because it was very simple and calm. We did not look at our phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I felt that the time was stoppedLỗi dạng bị động: phải là “time had stopped”. After a hard month it was exactly what I needed, and now I try to do something like this every summer.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggsCụm động từ kèm danh sách ba mục rõ ràng and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtakingTính từ mạnh, chính xác. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so it was almost empty. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway, and we all laughingLỗi dạng động từ: phải là “laughed” hoặc “were laughing” so much. What made the day special was how unhurried it feltCâu chẻ cho câu trả lời một trọng tâm rõ ràng: nobody looked at their phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I lost track of timeCụm từ tự nhiên, mang tính thành ngữ. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggs and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtaking. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so we almost had it to ourselves. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway and we all laughed until our sides hurt. What made the day special was how unhurried it feltCâu chẻ cho câu trả lời một trọng tâm rõ ràng: nobody looked at their phones, we simply talked about our plans, and I lost track of time completely. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, a genuine breath of fresh airCụm thành ngữ dùng chính xác, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.