Describe a new law you would like to see introduced

Band 6

I would like to talk about a law that I want in my country: everybody who ride主詞動詞不一致：應為「rides」 an electric scooter must wear a helmet and use the cycle lanes. The idea come時態錯誤：應為「came」 to me last spring, when a man on a scooter without helmet went across the road near my university and almost hit a bus. He was okay, but I can not stop時態錯誤：應為「could not stop」 thinking that it could be much worse. In my city these scooters are very popular基本說法，限制了Lexical Resource的分數 for students and delivery riders, but the rules are not er自然的停頓，填充詞不顯眼 ready for this. The law would apply for riders of every age and also for the companies that give the scooters, because they must give helmets and explain the rules at the beginning. The government should also run a short campaign before the law starts, so that people hear about it first. I think it is good基本形容詞，限制了Lexical Resource的分數 for the country, because fewer accidents means less problems主詞動詞不一致與可數名詞錯誤：應為「fewer accidents mean fewer problems」 for hospitals, and a small change like this can protect漏掉「would」：應為「would protect」 a lot of people, especially students, who ride very fast near the university gates.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a law I’d introduce in my country: a rule that everyone riding an electric scooter must wear a helmet and keep to the cycle lanes. The idea came to me last spring, when a rider with no helmet swerved across the road outside my university and narrowly missed a bus精準、自然的詞語搭配. He was fine, but I couldn’t stop thinking about how easily it could have gone the other way. In my city these scooters have become very popular in a couple of years, mostly among students and delivery riders, and the rules haven’t really caught up with them現在完成式加上慣用的片語動詞. The law would apply to riders of every age and to the companies that provide the scooters, who would have comply漏掉「to」：應為「have to comply」 with it by giving out helmets and explaining the rules. The government should also run a short campaign before the law starts, so that people hear about it first. I think it would benefit the whole country清楚表明意見，回答了「explain」那一行, because fewer accidents mean less pressure on hospitals, and it’s a small change that could protect many people.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a law I’d introduce in my country: a rule that everyone riding an electric scooter must wear a helmet and keep to the cycle lanes. The idea came to me last spring, when a rider with no helmet swerved across the road outside my university and narrowly missed a bus. He was fine, but I couldn’t stop thinking about how easily it could have gone the other way. In my city these scooters have become hugely popular in just a couple of years, mostly among students and delivery riders, and the rules haven’t really caught up. The law would apply to riders of every age and to the companies that provide the scooters, who would have to give out helmets and explain the rules when someone first uses one. The government should also run a short campaign before the law starts, so that people hear about it first. It would benefit the whole country, not only the riders清楚說明好處的對比結構, because fewer accidents mean less pressure on hospitals and fewer drivers who have to live with a near miss. Frankly, it’s a small change that would protect a lot of people自然、有自信的收尾句.