Describe a home you like but would not want to live in

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I want to describe the villa that my aunt Dilfuza haveОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «has» in the hills outside Tashkent. It is about an hour from the city, and she buildОшибка времени: должно быть «built» it five years ago with her husband. The house has big glass windows on every side, so the rooms are full of light all day, and there is a wooden terrace with a very nice viewПростая лексика; ограничивает Lexical Resource of the mountains. Behind the house is a garden with apple trees. I like it because it is very quiet and the air is fresh, and every time I visited I feeledОшибка в неправильном глаголе: должно быть «felt» relaxed very quickly. But I would not want to live there. First, it is far from everything, so even if you need bread you must go by car, and I am worryОшибка формы: должно быть «worry» about driving there in winter. Second, I am a city person, I like walking to see my friends and sit in cafes. Also the glass walls isОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «are» difficult to clean and the house is difficult to warm in winter, so my aunt is always busy. It is a beautiful place for a weekend, but it is not good for my everyday life, and I think I would miss the city very much after one month.

Band 7

I’d like to describe the villa my aunt Dilfuza owns in the hills outside Tashkent. It’s about an hour from the city, and she built it five years ago with her husband. The house has big glass windows on every side, so the rooms are full of light all day, and there’s a wooden terrace with a stunning view of the mountainsТочное, естественное словосочетание. Behind the house there’s a garden with apple trees. I really like it because it’s so peaceful and the air is so fresh; I always come away feeling relaxed. However, I wouldn’t want to live there. For one thing, it’s in the middle of nowhere, so even if you run out of bread you have to drive, and winter roads makesОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «make» me nervous. For another, I’m a city person at heartЕстественное идиоматичное именное сочетание, устойчивое выражение, and I enjoy being able to walk to see friends or sit in a cafe. On top of that, the glass walls are hard to keep clean and the house is difficult to heat in winter, so my aunt is permanently busy with upkeepЧёткая связка результата объединяет причины. It’s a wonderful place for a weekend, but it wouldn’t suit my everyday lifestyle.

Band 8

I’d like to describe the villa my aunt Dilfuza owns in the hills outside Tashkent, about an hour from the city. She and her husband built it five years ago, and it has glass walls on every side, so the rooms are flooded with light all day, plus a wooden terrace with a stunning view of the mountains and a garden of apple trees behind. I’m genuinely fond of it because it’s so peaceful, and I always come away feeling restored. Even so, I couldn’t see myself living there. For one thing, it’s in the middle of nowhere: running out of bread means a drive, and winter roads make me nervous. For another, I’m a city person at heart, happiest when I can walk to see friends or sit in a cafeСложное предложение с сокращённым определительным оборотом. On top of that, glass is hard to keep clean and harder to heat in winter, so my aunt seems permanently occupied with upkeep. It’s a lovely place for a weekend, but it would never suit the way I live, and I think I’d miss the noise of the city within a month.